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Finny Rough Animation

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Trying to give more loves to this character



But this animation just won't turn out how I want T.T
I know what I want it to do, but it's not doing it xD

So I gave up, and I'm going to bed instead lol

Hope yal like it anyways
I'm proud of how the back legs are moving <3
the rest looks like crap c:

Finny (c) =BakaMichi


I opened Crits on this because I want to be able to fix this, but I can't quite work out how.

Could somebody help? T.T

if you have msn I'd be happy to send you the frames so you can redline them or something D':
I need to improve on these things.
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

This Animation, to me, seems fine. There is only one flaw that I can really pinpoint, and that is the tail.

From the pic and the animation, tail design is not the same. Not the thing that bugs me. Looking at the animation, it seems like the tail is animated awkwardly and looks like it is compleately to the right side of the rump instead in the middle. My suggestion is a little bit more perspective on the tail? Make it seem like the tail is kinda coming out at us? Make it seem more centered? If that makes any sense.